Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Brador

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Brador

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:27, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Slightly longer one this time
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS, WP:COMICS

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. "My cab—squash melons!" DwartiiDelver (talk) 00:53, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
2. Weird, I remember reading and reviewing this but I didn't support or object? Looks good! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:14, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:45, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:45, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
5. Reviewed and then saw ecks' objection, so have an extra vote. :P MasterFred(talk) 22:40, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
6. 1358 ^(Talk) 09:50, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Dwartii

• I think his belt and cross strap could be noted.
• Eyebrow and skin color can be documented as well. DwartiiDelver (talk) 03:04, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Both added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:52, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
• Are the stones of obedience a single device, or should "devices" be used instead? DwartiiDelver (talk) 00:19, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Hmm, good question. It's actually a bunch of necklaces, and each Ewok gets an individual necklace that controls them. What do you think? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:21, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
    • If each Ewok gets an individual necklace, I think "devices" would be more appropriate. DwartiiDelver (talk) 00:25, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
      • On that note, I've just linked Necklace/Legends. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:28, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Can the entire necklaces be referred to as "stones of obedience," or should that sentence instead say something along the lines of "...put under the influence of necklaces containing/comprised of/etc. stones of obedience"? DwartiiDelver (talk) 00:34, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
          • Sure, added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:39, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

Ecks

• The last part of the first Bio paragraph is somewhat PBP and unnecessarily repetitive. You basically say twice that (a) he needs the bordok to transport melons and (b) the bordok is not cooperating. See if you can cut down on the repetition a bit. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:27, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
  • How's that? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:48, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:50, 19 January 2022 (UTC)