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Blockade of the Rimma Trade Route
- Nominated by: Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 06:55, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(5 ACs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
Kilson(Let's have a chat) 19:30, July 3, 2011 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 05:12, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 16:28, July 4, 2011 (UTC) - —Tommy 9281 Monday, July 4, 2011, 18:43 UTC
- JangFett (Talk) 19:16, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Menkooroo 04:49, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Kilson
In the Bts, "The event was first mentioned on the Sith Empire's Holonet page, as found on The Old Republic website." Isn't the HoloNet on the The Old Republic website supposed to be in-universe? If so, then you should point that out in the sentence.- Otherwise, nice job. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 16:37, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Taken care of, and thank you for the look-through. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 18:24, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
Floyd:
One thing: In the aftermath, you say "After the conclusion of the war with the signing of the Treaty of Coruscant, the Kel Dor Jedi Master documented the Empire's first wave in the conflict, which included short notes on the blockade of the Rimma Trade Route." What Kel Dor Jedi Master?IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:31, July 4, 2011 (UTC)- Woopsie. Fized. Thanks for the review. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 05:10, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
Snowball if you address this quick!
As the Kathol Sector wasn't settled until ~600 BBY, can an article about an event three thousand years prior claim that the Rimma Trade route took starships there? Maybe a more general statement about "deep in the outer rim" or something might be more accurate?Menkooroo 08:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)- I did not know that. Thanks for the wrinkle—I've removed the mention. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 04:39, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:40, July 7, 2011 (UTC)