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Black 11

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  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:46, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:03, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote OOM 224 22:16, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:11, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (Talk) 16:16, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

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OOM
  • Please check my edit. Along with some various minor issues, I've reordered some information to vary the use of sentence structure and done some rewording to clarify things.
  • There shouldn't be hidden notes within status articles unless there's a real practical need, such as name disputes on high-traffic articles. If you want, you can copy the messages over to the talk page or the Comments section on this nom page.
    • Removed.
  • Per WP:MOS's Linking section, the prose sections of articles should not link to disambiguation pages.
    • Saw only one, removed, hopefully that's all.
  • "in order for Vader to discuss the space station's lagging construction schedule with its commander, Moff Tiaan Jerjerrod" — I don't think this is relevant. Perhaps it can be replaced by "shortly before the Battle of Endor"?
    • Reworded.
  • Precedence for film subject articles is to mention the film trilogy in the BTS. OOM 224 22:07, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You reference the model to ROTJ in the infobox and Death Star in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:03, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Does a source describe the TIE as being powered by its flight control system? It seems odd to describe it that way since it isn't actually providing any form of energy to the ship. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:03, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
  • "channel of five" sounds kind of odd, I'd use the name tactical channel five like the source does assuming that's what the quote is about. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:03, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
  • There's definitely room for more images to be added to the article, you could add an image of Dance to the first paragraph and one from the LEGO game to the BTS. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:03, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
    • All addressed. EX-4-9 image used for behind the scenes. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:26, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

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