Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Binog Mesa

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Binog Mesa

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:03, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 10:02, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 385 words (92 introduction, 250 body, 43 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Rip on this one going slightly over from CA. On the bright side, it's basically done —spookywilloww^talk 19:21, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 02:37, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:11, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
4. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 13:54, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:15, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
6. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:02, 30 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara

• perhaps a tiny bit of context for the Bogano Vault? BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 20:32, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
  • There's not really more context then what is already provided. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:38, 3 May 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• The Zeffonian mural should be mentioned first under History, followed by Cordova's discovery of it.
• No available quotes, even about the mural itself? UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:01, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed and no quotes about the location or mural. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:05, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

Marvac

• Looking at the article, I think it’s best if you add the fact that Cal Kestis used Psychometry to learn about what happened in the gamemechanics section in your History section. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:46, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
  • There are no echoes in this area. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:05, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
    • I'm pretty sure that there are. Please look at following links:
      • https://game-maps.com/SWJFO/Binog-Mesa.asp
      • https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sHEWOcY9VUo Marvacian Archivist (talk) 04:43, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
        • Looks like I was mistaken. Should be added now. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:20, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
          • Ok no worries. For future nominations, whether you are reviewing or nominating, I highly recommend GamesMaps for Fallen Order (https://game-maps.com/SWJFO/Jedi-Fallen-Order-Maps.asp). Pretty much tells you everything. The website also has maps for Jedi Survivor if you are interested (https://game-maps.com/SWJS/Star-Wars-Jedi-Survivor-Map.asp). Please note that for the Jedi Survivor maps, there may be some missing as it's still being added. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 03:20, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
• I think you should mention that the binog species are "amphi-mammalians" in your intro to provide context for the binog species. I see that you have added this in your description, but I think its important to also mention it in your intro. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:04, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
• I also think you should also mention that Cal Kestis is a fugitive Jedi rather than mentioning that Kestis is a Jedi Padawan. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:04, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
• Double check the The Art of Star Wars Jedi: Fallen Order, particularly the initial pages of "Chapter IV: Bogano" as I believe it shows concept art of the Binog Mesa. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:04, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
• There is a bit of inconsistency of Zeffo and Zeffonians. In your intro, you mention the Zeffonians as the "Zeffo" but in your History section, you mention the species as the Zeffonians. Please make sure that the species is mentioned as Zeffonians throughout the article. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:04, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed all except the concept art one. Do you know which one depicts the Binog Mesa? They all appear to depict different areas except maybe the one on the top-right of the second page of that section. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:50, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:12, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
• (Review Note) Well done on updating these JFO articles so far! They are looking excellent! Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:04, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
• In description section, you say "It was bordered by the Fractured Plain and Great Divide regions and contained short, white limestone and red clay cliffs with hanging vegetation off the sides and slopes between the flat areas of grass." Is it possible to break this up.
• No need to say "sometime" in your History Section as "long before the Imperial era" will suffice. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 05:50, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:44, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

CC-8

• Description section still needs to use the subject's name in the first sentence. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:57, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 00:14, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
• Can the body specify why the presence of binogs influenced the Zeffo to build the vault on Bogano? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:12, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
  • It's unkown. The game just states that the binogs are part of the reason why they built the vault. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:57, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:02, 30 May 2023 (UTC)