Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Berrun

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Berrun

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:01, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Winterz (talk) 19:57, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 14:33, February 20, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote JangFett (Talk) 04:48, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
  5. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 17:09, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
  6. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 19:30, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Fred strikes
  • The two halves of the last sentence in the intro are completely unrelated. I think perhaps a rewording/ordering of the sentence, or maybe a split, would be better.
    • Done.
  • You give more context on the location of the planet in the intro than in the description. Particularly "relatively close to the Core Worlds." MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 04:44, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
    • Moved the Core Worlds part to the Description. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 04:58, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:00, February 21, 2013 (UTC)


  • I'm not making this a formal objection, but is there anyway you can split this sentence up? The members of the Republic Special Forces squad known as the Surgeons served out their life sentences in the prison after they were convicted of war crimes as a result of targeting the families of their Imperial targets.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 07:01, February 21, 2013 (UTC)