Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bellis

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Bellis

  • Nominated by: Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:59, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: You've seen Lin, her comes her spy husband...

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Winterz (talk) 17:35, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:20, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:40, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Lotta stuff for a dead guy. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 19:32, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:13, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Winterz, le whiner
    • The Sergeant's orders were not only to meet Bellis but most importantly, to retrieve the intel the agent had gathered. In the article however, you only mention that the Sergeant was assigned to meet with Bellis in some alley. You should reword that, especially because it was an alley in a hostile village.
    • Considering that he was assigned to a hostile village, that surely warrants an article for the mission. That article, which is linked above, already exists so you may tweak it as you like but you should add it to Bellis article. Winterz (talk) 23:37, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
      • Forgot to link to the mission in the body. It's fixed now.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:23, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • If "Mantellian Separatist Movement" is a formal name, should "separatist" not be capitalized when referring to the movement by that singular name? Both in the intro and the body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:47, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:13, January 25, 2013 (UTC)