Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Hsskhor

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Battle of Hsskhor

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 05:43, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part of WP:NSW.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. There's a WookieeProject: New South Wales now? I'm flattered. Clean, apart from a few typos. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 06:30, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
2. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 03:15, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
3. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 14:40, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
4. Mauser^Comlink 16:56, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
5. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 13:27, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:50, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Mauser:
   • Again, there's no need to fill the Commanders section of the infobox with "Unknown".
     • Addressed.
   • And again, it looks very clear. Mauser^Comlink 10:11, 24 July 2009 (UTC)\
     • Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 03:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
2. Who is Adanar? His mention is rather random. I think at least his allegiance could be added. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 02:31, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
   • • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 03:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
3. Please watch the flowery prose. Also, it's unclear what the Brotherhood is when you only say it was "over twenty thousand strong"; it sounds like you're trying to avoid putting a describing noun to it, which doesn't flow well. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:06, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 03:49, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:50, 31 July 2009 (UTC)