- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Battle of Hsskhor
- Nominated by: IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 05:43, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Part of WP:NSW.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- There's a WookieeProject: New South Wales now? I'm flattered. Clean, apart from a few typos. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 06:30, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
- —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 03:15, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 14:40, 26 July 2009 (UTC)- MauserComlink 16:56, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 13:27, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 05:50, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Object
- Mauser:
Again, there's no need to fill the Commanders section of the infobox with "Unknown".- Addressed.
- And again, it looks very clear. MauserComlink 10:11, 24 July 2009 (UTC)\
- Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 03:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Who is Adanar? His mention is rather random. I think at least his allegiance could be added.Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 02:31, 26 July 2009 (UTC)- Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 03:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Please watch the flowery prose. Also, it's unclear what the Brotherhood is when you only say it was "over twenty thousand strong"; it sounds like you're trying to avoid putting a describing noun to it, which doesn't flow well.CC7567 (talk) 05:06, 29 July 2009 (UTC)- Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 03:49, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:50, 31 July 2009 (UTC)