Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Battle of Arantara

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Battle of Arantara

• Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:28, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: lets try this again
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Nice work. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
2. Great work, especially with your date sourcing. As a note, I updated File:Rex-injured.png with a higher quality version. Dentface (talk) 08:58, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:46, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:05, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 18:06, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Braha'tok returns

• I think you should find synonym terms for for at least one use of "Rex" and "awoke" in the second battle para, where you've repeated their use in two/three consecutive sentences. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:57, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
    • That looks fine. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• The citation for the previous battle in the infobox needs to specify what source refers to him as a Jedi General and which sources provides the definition of that term. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:18, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:18, 7 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Just to confirm, does the comic use this exact capitalisation? I've only seen "Battle Of Arantara" used.
  • Yes, the comic does capitalize every word, but The Star Wars Book says “He serves with merit at the Battles of Arantara, Christophsis, Anaxes, Saleucami, and many more.” So I will mark that as first ID. Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:27, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah, that's good OOM 224 18:06, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
• Imagecat OOM 224 09:12, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Added Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:40, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:06, 11 August 2021 (UTC)