Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bane Back Spider

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Bane Back Spider

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:52, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Requested for a redirect to deleted so the proper capitalization is added to the page. Will update when moved.
• Date Archived: 02:53, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 600 words (77 introduction, 449 body, 74 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:59, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 15:13, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:15, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 19:58, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
5. Panther436 (talk) 02:50, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara

• quotes available for each of the sections? BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 20:02, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
  • No more quotes
• i'd add a little more info in the datenote, stating that since the Nightbrothers began domesiticating the spiders prior to the game's beginning, it must have been before 14 BBY.
  • Expanded date note
• is there any more info on what "issues" the nightbrothers ran into?
  • The game doesn't really elaborate on the issues, it just states that they ran into some.
• i think you can remove the subsectioning in the body, doesn't really make sense to have a subsection with two sentences.
  • Removed subsectioning.
• split the date notes - one specific date note for the nightbrothers thing and another regular datenote using JFOdate for the Cal parts
  • I don't really think this is necessary as the reference states the necessary information for both dates. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:46, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
• review notes: copy edit BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 20:22, 14 April 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• Are they specifically identified as being non-sentient? Lewisr (talk) 03:04, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
  • No, so I removed the sentience. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:33, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• The article title is fully capitalized, but the article has it in lowercase throughout. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:03, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Should be fixed now. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:14, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• "but the task was known to be deadly" Please reword if the source doesn't support this wording.
  • Reworded.
• "he encountered many Bane Back Spiders that proved to be a nuisance to him" Is this supported by the game?
  • This was left over from the original page and I forgot to remove it.
• I'm going to request the removal of the BTS image. Not only is it too small, it is also very dark, making it difficult to discern the the subject. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:55, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:31, 5 July 2023 (UTC)

CC-8

• Context needed for Haxion Brood. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:32, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:20, 12 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:52, 14 July 2023 (UTC)