Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Band Light

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Band Light

Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 17:48, September 5, 2020 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Cal would want it this way.

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~~Please specify what "databank" you're talking about in the article.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:44, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
- Hello Shay, thanks for looking it over. The BTS already says it is the in-game databank. What other context are you looking for? It is not in-universe, if that is what you mean. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 14:22, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
  - It should be reflected in Ref 2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:24, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
    - Gotcha! Added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:28, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
~~I would just specify how the crew members were killed instead of revealing the true cause after explaining the deaths.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:38, September 8, 2020 (UTC)
- Ok, removed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:49, September 10, 2020 (UTC)

The Description section in this article is unnecessary. All it's doing is repeating what is already more appropriately presented in the History and Commanders and crew -- more to the point, the Description section is not for mentioning crewmembers. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:41, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
- Ok, removed. Thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 11:50, September 23, 2020 (UTC)

Note: with the latest edit, the article has fallen below the word limit. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 11:50, September 23, 2020 (UTC)