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Balagash
- Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 22:22, 15 October 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 04:46, 21 November 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 282 words (73 introduction, 177 body, 32 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 299 words (74 introduction, 193 body, 32 behind the scenes)
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Support votes
—spookywillowwtalk 20:52, 22 October 2025 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 23:29, 27 October 2025 (UTC)
- Master Fredcerique
(talk) (he/him) 00:25, 16 November 2025 (UTC) - Xd1358 (Talk) 21:35, 19 November 2025 (UTC)
- ThePedantry (talk) 23:56, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
Objections
spookly
Seems fairly unusual to have information about a location (gardens) and a group from it (warriors) in description; usually that information is sectioned out per the LG.—spookywillowwtalk 23:09, 20 October 2025 (UTC)- Originally had it like that since they weren't actually on the planet itself, but sectioned it out CometSmudge (talk) 01:18, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
- I think it might be worth asking Imp actually whether it's relevant to even have in said case, I guess, if not worked organically into History as-needed. It definitely seems weird in Description and haven't seen it done that way elsewhere SA-wise, but at the same time fairly sure other planet/ast object articles don't always necessarily detail everything from their orbital bodies. It's different for a system and a planet because a system contains the planet within it, so the system article details the planet; unlike this, in which they are non-containing entities, albeit related. But obv if Balagash system was written, that by standard would include information about the specifics of Balagash and the moons because it contains them, if that makes sense. If it doesn't, would suggest asking Imp to explain it better.—spookywillowwtalk 22:14, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
- Imp agreed, so I cut out most of the moon info CometSmudge (talk) 20:45, 22 October 2025 (UTC)
- I think it might be worth asking Imp actually whether it's relevant to even have in said case, I guess, if not worked organically into History as-needed. It definitely seems weird in Description and haven't seen it done that way elsewhere SA-wise, but at the same time fairly sure other planet/ast object articles don't always necessarily detail everything from their orbital bodies. It's different for a system and a planet because a system contains the planet within it, so the system article details the planet; unlike this, in which they are non-containing entities, albeit related. But obv if Balagash system was written, that by standard would include information about the specifics of Balagash and the moons because it contains them, if that makes sense. If it doesn't, would suggest asking Imp to explain it better.—spookywillowwtalk 22:14, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
- Originally had it like that since they weren't actually on the planet itself, but sectioned it out CometSmudge (talk) 01:18, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
Ecks
Is Balagash green as viewed through a magnetic shield? The description seems to imply it's always green whereas the History section includes the bit about the shield. I.e. does the shield change the apparent color?Xd1358 (Talk) 19:02, 16 November 2025 (UTC)- I included the shield since it was mentioned in relation to Balagash, but I think the wording of the text implies Balagash actually does give off green light and it's not being changed by the shield CometSmudge (talk) 00:03, 17 November 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:46, 21 November 2025 (UTC)