Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ayanos Bactra

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Ayanos Bactra

  • Nominated by: Jinzler 19:43, February 7, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Knight Errant Sith

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 22:04, February 10, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:47, February 11, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 02:45, February 13, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:06, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
  5. OLIOSTER (talk) 19:15, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Moffship
  • Is the grammar in the bio quote correct? I'm pretty sure this should be a semicolon, and not a comma: "Temporary, we do not intend to hold the world."
    • Just checked; it should be a semicolon. Fixed. --Jinzler 21:55, February 10, 2011 (UTC)
  • In the third paragraph, it reads as if you are introducing Daiman for the first time - despite having done so in the previous paragraph. I'm guessing this is leftover from a previous version, but I wanted to check with you rather than remove it myself.
    • Ahh.. yes I must have missed that. Fixed. --Jinzler 21:55, February 10, 2011 (UTC)
  • Very nice. I think I'll go out and buy Knight Errant now. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:44, February 10, 2011 (UTC)
    • I would recommend it, it's actually reasonably good. Thanks for your review. --Jinzler 21:55, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:44, February 14, 2011 (UTC)