Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Attempt to capture Outpost 716

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Contents

  • 1 Attempt to capture Outpost 716
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support votes
      • 1.1.2 Objections
        • 1.1.2.1 Lew
        • 1.1.2.2 spookly
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Attempt to capture Outpost 716

  • Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:07, 3 August 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 05:10, 23 September 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 443 words (77 introduction, 328 body, 38 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 373 words (30 introduction, 306 body, 37 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Durge's Lance

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support votes

  1. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 21:18, 11 August 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 21:40, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:07, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
  4. Booply (talk) 18:21, 21 September 2025 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 04:45, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Lew
  • I think the intro could briefly include a mention of Ventress later successfully taking the base Lewisr (talk) 17:41, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
  • That Palpatine was Supreme Chancellor of the Republic, and Dooku Head of State of the Confederacy would be worth establishing when talking about them controlling the war Lewisr (talk) 17:41, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
    • Added both! Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:17, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
spookly
  • The phrasing "Sure enough" seems too informal for encyclopedic prose here; would like to see that sentence reworked.—spookywillowwtalk 12:31, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
    • Edited Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:41, 4 September 2025 (UTC)

Comments

  • If you're wondering why the page needs the little "Grievous is a good tactician and fighter and stuff!" line, its because the comic makes a big deal of Grievous's skill and how "even Grievous" couldn't take the base Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:14, 3 August 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:45, 23 September 2025 (UTC)