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Contents
Attempt to capture Outpost 716
- Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:07, 3 August 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 05:10, 23 September 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 443 words (77 introduction, 328 body, 38 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 373 words (30 introduction, 306 body, 37 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Durge's Lance
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Support votes
- SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 21:18, 11 August 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 21:40, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 00:07, 9 September 2025 (UTC)- Booply (talk) 18:21, 21 September 2025 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:45, 23 September 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Lew
I think the intro could briefly include a mention of Ventress later successfully taking the baseLewisr (talk) 17:41, 13 August 2025 (UTC)That Palpatine was Supreme Chancellor of the Republic, and Dooku Head of State of the Confederacy would be worth establishing when talking about them controlling the warLewisr (talk) 17:41, 13 August 2025 (UTC)- Added both! Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:17, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
spookly
The phrasing "Sure enough" seems too informal for encyclopedic prose here; would like to see that sentence reworked.—spookywillowwtalk 12:31, 1 September 2025 (UTC)- Edited Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:41, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
Comments
- If you're wondering why the page needs the little "Grievous is a good tactician and fighter and stuff!" line, its because the comic makes a big deal of Grievous's skill and how "even Grievous" couldn't take the base Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:14, 3 August 2025 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:45, 23 September 2025 (UTC)