- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Attack on Korriban
- Nominated by: --Jace Onasi (talk) 09:30, November 29, 2016 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:My first nomination, so I humbly beg for your mercy.
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Cwedin
- Welcome to the world of nominating! Great job on the article! Just a couple things:
- The infobox should have an event in its "previous" field.
The infobox includes details not present in the article (droids, starfighters, etc.). These should be added in.The BTS section should be sourced.
- I'll continue once these are addressed. - Cwedin(talk) 21:24, February 10, 2017 (UTC)
- Finally, a comment! I've done the last two points, but the problem with adding a preceding battle is that the Invasion of Ziost, the closest known predecessor, could of occurred concurrently with the Attack on Korriban, however unlikely. To my knowledge, there is nothing in the game which indicates the chronology of these two.--Jace Onasi (talk) 10:09, February 12, 2017 (UTC)
Oh, ok. I think that for the article's sake we can just list the Invasion as being prior.
- Finally, a comment! I've done the last two points, but the problem with adding a preceding battle is that the Invasion of Ziost, the closest known predecessor, could of occurred concurrently with the Attack on Korriban, however unlikely. To my knowledge, there is nothing in the game which indicates the chronology of these two.--Jace Onasi (talk) 10:09, February 12, 2017 (UTC)
- And I think that'll be it, actually. Nice work! - Cwedin(talk) 13:15, February 12, 2017 (UTC)
- I've added the Invasion of Ziost to the preceding box.--Jace Onasi (talk) 09:41, February 17, 2017 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
- As a rule of thumb, we use numerical notations in the infobox as opposed to spelling out numbers. The point of an infobox is for quick reference, and numbers are easier to read than words.
- If the article is titled "Attack on Korriban," than the section should be titled "The attack," not "The incursion."
- The name of this battle is conjectural, so we can't use "Attack on Korriban" as a proper noun.
- I fixed a few linking issues for you. See the article history for that. MasterFred
(Whatever) 18:37, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II
- An impressive first nomination! The article has now grown over the 1000-word limit (and there are still things that need to be included in it), which means this nomination will now be archived so that you may take the article to the FAN page instead. Imperators II(Talk) 19:28, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Comments
- I suppose it isn't stated anywhere in the game if the Invasion of Ziost occurred before or during the Attack on Korriban? There is a pretty small time frame between Ziost and chapter I of KOTFE, so it is possible that the two were concurrent.--Jace Onasi (talk) 09:30, November 29, 2016 (UTC)