- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Ashla (moon)
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 15:43, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: My first GA nom.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Winterz (talk) 23:59, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 12:44, September 20, 2012 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 22:39, September 25, 2012 (UTC)
JangFett (Talk) 14:21, October 4, 2012 (UTC)- Good work. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 07:27, October 10, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Winterz
While they were exiled by force, they were not necessarily forced to meditate. They meditated if they wanted to re-achieve balance and return from exile. You should reword it, explaining why would they meditate. Also it's actually contemplate, which is rather different than 'meditating' especially in Star Wars context.- As to the first point, thank you for the correction. Reworded.
- As to the second point, Star Wars: Dawn of the Jedi 0 actually uses both "contemplate" and "meditate" in the context of the exiled Je'daii observing the moons. (And the Free Dictionary entry on the word "contemplate" indicates it has a similar meaning to "meditate on".)
- Okay then, I won't object towards that decision, but bear in mind that though they are similar words in out-universe, in Star Wars context contemplating is still the same while Meditation is a 'force-application' therefore a lot different from the first. Anyway, this is not an objection, just a reminder. Winterz (talk) 23:58, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
Anymore quotes?- Nope, unfortunately no more quotes relevant to the subject.
- Looking good for a first nomination. May it be the first of many. Also I'm happy someonelse noticed the Dawn of the Jedi important content, I've already made some notes and plan on updating several of related articles as well. Winterz (talk) 22:09, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you. Imperators II(Talk) 21:12, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
Mention should be made of the exiles on Bogan contemplating Ashla in return.- Added.
Tython is a primary setting for The Old Republic. Have you checked for mentions, pictures, etc, from there?- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:08, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
- I do not have access to the game myself, however, I have asked Cade Calrayn if there's any info on the moon in the game and I'm now waiting for his answer. Imperators II(Talk) 08:57, September 6, 2012 (UTC)
- Cade has told me that Ashla is not mentioned in the game, however, a single moon of Tython appears in a cutscene. I am not sure whether I should include that info in the article. Imperators II(Talk) 15:34, September 6, 2012 (UTC)
- Possibly some BTS info regarding the appearance of a single moon in TOR would be warranted, noting the lack of positive identification. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:38, September 12, 2012 (UTC)
- Added. I also put TOR in the "Appearances" section as a possible first appearance. Imperators II(Talk) 17:29, September 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Possibly some BTS info regarding the appearance of a single moon in TOR would be warranted, noting the lack of positive identification. - Cavalier One
- Cade has told me that Ashla is not mentioned in the game, however, a single moon of Tython appears in a cutscene. I am not sure whether I should include that info in the article. Imperators II(Talk) 15:34, September 6, 2012 (UTC)
- I do not have access to the game myself, however, I have asked Cade Calrayn if there's any info on the moon in the game and I'm now waiting for his answer. Imperators II(Talk) 08:57, September 6, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps CC7567 (talk) 21:15, October 10, 2012 (UTC)