Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aron Harcourt

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Aron Harcourt

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Well done. Nahdar Vebb (talk) 12:37, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Since 2008 I knew about this guy only through this site, and have always felt bad for him. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:33, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:24, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:17, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
  5. 501st dogma(talk) 16:58, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Winterz (talk) 16:21, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
  7. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 05:43, January 13, 2014 (UTC)
  8. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:21, January 13, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Nahdar
  • I'm no expert on this, but since something unidentified (like the unidentified planet in the infobox) has a conjectured title, doesn't it have to be /not/ capitalized?
    • You speak truth.
  • You start the last two sentences of the intro with "Although".
    • Fixed.
  • Can you give some context in the quote descriptions?
    • I've given it a bit here and there. Lemme know if you think it needs more.
      • I'd add who is loving so much in the P&T quote, for those who skim the article first. Nahdar Vebb (talk) 08:28, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
  • I made some changes myself. Nahdar Vebb (talk) 13:37, October 19, 2013 (UTC)
Hanzo
  • Fairly minor, but please make the uniform its own equipment section. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:26, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
    • On second thought I think what you have is acceptable. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:27, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • Prelim: please reload that infobox so that all of the required fields can be filled.
    • Done in 4dot's apparent inactivity.
  • Also, image captions should not be punctuated if they are not complete sentences, and the same goes for quote captions. CC7567 (talk) 19:27, December 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • The current amount of linking leaves something to be desired—at a cursory glance, marriage, starship, navy, holograph instead of hologram, and bounty need to be linked in the intro. Someone needs to put in a good amount of work in this area. CC7567 (talk) 06:22, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • I went through and fixed some linking if that helps. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:46, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • "The former captain chose deceit—he made a deal to pay half of the fee before retrieval of the hologram, and another half later—instead he paid Fett all the money he had up front." The dashes make this sentence difficult to understand; currently, it's made up of three independent clauses (before, between, and after the dashes). This needs to be split up and reworded. CC7567 (talk) 07:10, January 12, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I'm skeptical whether the Empire comic itself can stand as a source for the 0 ABY date. I would request that you look into that to verify.
    • From looking at the comic's article, the date apparently comes from Omnibus: Boba Fett. I'm going to try to verify that claim. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:54, January 12, 2014 (UTC)
  • Additionally, the 0 ABY date is currently sort of info/intro-exclusive only right now. The article only states "several months after" Yavin, which doesn't necessarily mean 0 ABY. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:13, January 12, 2014 (UTC)
    • Previewed the Omnibus book on Amazon and confirmed it. Sourced date and have added it to his biography to avoid the infobox-exclusiveness. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:59, January 12, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:21, January 13, 2014 (UTC)


  • Note my usage of the {{CSWECite}} template for citations. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:33, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
    • Careful not to show page numbers in the Sources section. Winterz (talk) 16:19, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

ACvote Idle objections two weeks old. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:17, January 10, 2014 (UTC)
ACvote 1358 (Talk) 23:47, January 10, 2014 (UTC)
ACvote Not the first nor the second time, sir... Winterz (talk) 00:30, January 11, 2014 (UTC)