- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Arno (stormtrooper)
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:24, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 11:52, July 20, 2015 (UTC)- Paragraph breaks are your friend. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:59, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (talk) 01:19, July 31, 2015 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:06, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:49, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
Object
Exiled Jedi
Did you check to see if the story was printed in the second edition of Galaxy Guide 5?--Exiled Jedi (talk) 01:13, July 31, 2015 (UTC)- Never mind, I found out the story was not in the second edition.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 01:19, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
Ayrehead
The Stormtrooper Corps is currently infobox exclusive.Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:03, July 31, 2015 (UTC)- If I may respond, I would argue that it's not, and this is something I considered in my own review. Simply saying he's a stormtrooper is tantamount to saying he's in the Stormtrooper Corps. Hanzo, if you want to mention the Stormtrooper Corps in the article someplace, that's up to you, but I would advise against it if you find that it ends up disrupting the article flow, which is my concern here. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:50, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
- A direct mention certainly isn't necessary but I think a link somewhere should still be included. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:12, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
- I do feel like, based on the way the article's currently written, the article's flow would be disrupted. We don't consider that to be infobox exclusive info because it's obvious that all stormtroopers were part of the Stormtrooper Corps. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:46, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
- Though I still don't think it's necessary, added a pipelink now, as it doesn't hurt for the article to have that link either. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:28, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
- I do feel like, based on the way the article's currently written, the article's flow would be disrupted. We don't consider that to be infobox exclusive info because it's obvious that all stormtroopers were part of the Stormtrooper Corps. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:46, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
- A direct mention certainly isn't necessary but I think a link somewhere should still be included. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:12, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
- If I may respond, I would argue that it's not, and this is something I considered in my own review. Simply saying he's a stormtrooper is tantamount to saying he's in the Stormtrooper Corps. Hanzo, if you want to mention the Stormtrooper Corps in the article someplace, that's up to you, but I would advise against it if you find that it ends up disrupting the article flow, which is my concern here. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:50, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
Comments
- Note I don't include a page for their AT-AT walker, since it's unclear whether that was Tempest 1 or another walker. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:25, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- The five stormtroopers being male is based on Luke's thoughts to himself, referring to them as "boys." Perhaps that's not solid enough evidence of all of them being male, as most likely they were in helmets and speaking through a filter. Granted, one of them is referred to as a male, but we can't tell which one is meant to be Arno. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:54, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:49, August 2, 2015 (UTC)