Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Arhan

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Arhan

  • Nominated by: --Eyrezer 05:14, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 16:55, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
  2. A notable article. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:51, March 16, 2010 (UTC)
  3. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 23:41, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:31, March 18, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:19, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Skippy; we'll eventually end CRO at this rate
    • Intro: from base-line Humansin What's Humansin?
      • There was a space missing.
    • Culture: No section? If you can confirm that Peert was a Human (unsourced in his article), then you can mention that Arhans married Humans.
      • Peert's species is not identified, although he looks like one and is the only person not to have it explicitly named so probably a good candidate for the "duck" test. If they had childred - ie Arhan/Human compatibility, I'd put it in, but I don't feel it is enough to create a culture section.
    • History: A notable Arhan was Filice Ginzork. Was she in-universe notable?
      • Changed. --Eyrezer 17:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
    • Hist: The last sentence flows awkwardly. Could you move it to just before "Filice operated as the Shield's slicer" or before "Filice and Peert lost two of the original members"?
      • Moved. --Eyrezer 01:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)
    • Good job, as always. Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:23, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Baseline or Base-line? Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:43, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
    • base-line --Eyrezer 00:47, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:20, March 19, 2010 (UTC)