Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Apatros (colony)

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Apatros (colony)

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 22:49, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Raised from a redlink. *sniff* They grow up so fast...

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Nice job, Floyd. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:12, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
2. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 07:09, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
3. Mauser^Comlink 10:26, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
4. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 22:45, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
5. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 19:51, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 09:22, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. I'm seeing a lot of sentences starting with "The colony" or "The colony of Apatros." Could you vary this up with a few synonyms, or perhaps restructure a few sentences? (I understand why you can't just call it "Apatros," but still.) Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:46, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 02:14, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
2. "Although all the buildings in Apatros were identical, navigating the streets was easy, as the barracks were placed in straight rows and columns." This isn't really making sense to me, particularly the "although". If the buildings were identical, wouldn't it essentially be harder to navigate with so many buildings that looked the same? Please clarify. CC7567 ^(talk) 01:17, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
   • Path of Destruction doesn't give any explanation either; that sentence is copied almost verbatim from the text. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 04:04, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
     • I blame inconsistent Star Wars canon, then. CC7567 ^(talk) 09:22, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:00, 27 July 2009 (UTC)