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Antidar Williams
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:29, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Back to some more TPM noms
(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:02, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
MasterFred(Whatever) 21:06, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 21:23, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
- User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 19:56, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:36, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
Now that's what I'm talking about - both Canon and Legends versions are status now. Imperators II(Talk) 10:57, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
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Anil
"Upon reaching the blockade, the Radiant VII docked in a hangar on board the Trade Federation flagship Saak'ak." I don't think this entire sentence can be sourced to TPM, especially Saak'ak being a flagship.Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:21, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
- Re-referenced the last part. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:27, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
- Could you please tell me the page number of that book that says Saak'ak is a flagship? At first, I was about to do the same change myself as a copy-edit, but I couldn't even find the mention of Saak'ak by name in the book.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:39, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
- Urrgh, you're totally right. Referenced correctly now. This is why I shouldn't edit articles as I'm going to bed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:48, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
- Could you please tell me the page number of that book that says Saak'ak is a flagship? At first, I was about to do the same change myself as a copy-edit, but I couldn't even find the mention of Saak'ak by name in the book.
- Re-referenced the last part. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:27, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
Is Judicial Forces ever identified in TPM? If not, the name will probably need a different reference.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:10, September 24, 2019 (UTC)
I'm assuming your mentions of Williams in the first paragraph of the Bts are actually supposed to be of Carson.MasterFred(Whatever) 02:58, September 24, 2019 (UTC)
- Ha, this is what happens when a character's name is more real-worldy and mundane then the actors. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:10, September 24, 2019 (UTC)
Imp
The Tarkin ref needs to be expanded to a full ref note since it doesn't mention Williams.Imperators II(Talk) 10:34, October 2, 2019 (UTC)- Expanded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:54, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
The sentence about the Legends novelization is missing a reference.Imperators II(Talk) 07:22, October 3, 2019 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:57, October 3, 2019 (UTC)