- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Ando (star)
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 22:59, January 4, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: ♫ Cause Ando, you're a star / In nobody's eyes but mine... ♫
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- I loved the detailed references. Stake black msg 04:13, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Me, too. :P Imperators II(Talk) 18:49, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 15:18, January 8, 2013 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:38, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
Menkooroo (talk) 14:33, January 27, 2013 (UTC)- Winterz (talk) 15:11, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
- --LelalMekha (talk) 11:52, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Floyd has one thing
There needs to be little more context on the Tho Yor and the Dai Bendu if you're going to mention them like that. Other than that, nice work.IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:43, January 6, 2013 (UTC)- Is that any better? Imperators II(Talk) 18:49, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
Dah
In the first sentence of the intro I believe it would be best to start with the year instead of "When", just to go easy on the reader(s).Winterz (talk) 16:42, January 25, 2013 (UTC)- Does that look any better? Imperators II(Talk) 21:48, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
Eh, the year in the start would certainly make it better but anyway, I've added some modifications just to make that sentence less confusing. See if they please you ;)Winterz (talk) 14:01, January 27, 2013 (UTC)- It's cool. Did I finally address the issue you had in mind? Imperators II(Talk) 15:09, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
- Does that look any better? Imperators II(Talk) 21:48, January 25, 2013 (UTC)
Mah
"The star Ando appeared in the skies of Ando Prime[6] when the Tho Yor starship..." The "appeared" here kind of reads as if that's the first time the star was ever in the skies. Maybe reword?- It emerged from the clouds. Better?
I've added a redlink to the infobox (and "Description" section).- Thanks, Menk. :D Filled.
In the BTS, make sure to not confuse Star Wars: The Roleplaying Game with the Star Wars Roleplaying Game.Menkooroo (talk) 08:24, January 27, 2013 (UTC)- Oops. Imperators II(Talk) 08:58, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:05, January 28, 2013 (UTC)