Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Alfonso

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Alfonso

• Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:38, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Robot Chicken?? In MY nominations?! It's more likely than you'd think.
• Date Archived: 06:36, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 655 words (62 introduction, 492 body, 101 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:44, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 01:00, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 03:32, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
4. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 06:36, 9 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• The sister seems like they should have a page Lewisr (talk) 05:01, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:53, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Darth Vader and the Death Star Lewisr (talk) 05:01, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:53, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
• I feel like the intro could use just a little more beefing up, at least including the 3 ABY date for the Palpatine stuff Lewisr (talk) 20:20, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Added more context for the Spanish bit and added dates. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:26, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• The skin color listed in the infobox is different from what the article body says.
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 03:32, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
• Davidson reprising his role for the sequel is probably worth documenting in BTS.
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 03:33, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
• I'm kinda undecided on this myself, but do you think Alfonso having a human-like mouth unlike other Ithorians should be mentioned? XD Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:22, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Given the nature of Robot Chicken I think it's best not to take that part literally. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 03:30, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Yeah, that's fair. What do you think about a short note about it in BTS, though? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:44, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:23, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
        • Thanks! Please let me know if there's anything that doesn't work for you in my reference tweak. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:28, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
• One last nitpick: I feel like the opening quote isn't really descriptive of the character, especially since "Uh-oh!" is already present in the next quote. One of the existing quotes, or a new one, would work better, imo. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:28, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Changed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:01, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• "he was purchased by the moisture farmer Owen Lars…" - the having been purchased part seems to be intro-exclusive, seems to only indicate the pair conversed in the bio.—spookywilloww^talk 04:29, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:33, 9 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:36, 9 December 2023 (UTC)