Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aldanna

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Aldanna

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:08, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CA-to-GA Project Part 5

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote YAY Dark Horse! :P Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:54, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:56, April 23, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 20:21, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Couldn't make anything witty this time. –Tm_T (Talk) 05:44, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • "When Vane arrived, Skywalker engaged him in a dogfight. Meanwhile, Vane's squadron, Tofen's Raiders, attacked Aldanna's forces." You should combine these two sentences.
    • Done.
  • I noticed when you mentioned Brian Kolchak in the Bts, the link was a redirect to Brian Koschak. I never read the comic, so I'm not sure if you're not referencing the correct artist or just misspelled his name.
    • The artist is actually credited as Brian Kolchak throughout all the comics he's worked on. I was going to say that I had no idea where the alternate spelling came from, but then I stumbled upon this post. So, yeah. Way to go, Dark Horse. You can't even spell your artist's name right.
  • And that's it. Once again, good job. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 11:09, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
    • Once again, thanks for your review. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 18:55, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
The nitpicker's nostril
  • Yes, totally nitpicky, and very minor, but the second sentence in the intro is rather long, I wonder if it could be split. (:) –Tm_T (Talk) 13:31, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:07, April 29, 2011 (UTC)