Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Agrippa Aldrete/Legends

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Agrippa Aldrete

• Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 23:56, August 7, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Because I don't want Liana Merian to get lonely.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Was going to think of an Indiana Jones pun based on the actor, but fail to think of one. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:16, August 8, 2013 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:47, August 10, 2013 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 07:06, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
4. Winterz (talk) 16:12, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 09:48, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Cav

• who was a prince of blood on their planet. Exactly what does this mean? Is it a title, or does it mean royal lineage, etc?
  • That means he comes from a princely family and thus bears the title of prince. --LelalMekha (talk) 13:49, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
    • I would change it to something a little simpler and clearer. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:08, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
      • Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 12:10, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
• The source field in the quote in the Lookalikes section is not displaying, or is missing. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:28, August 12, 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 13:49, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• "Agrippa Aldrete was a male Human who came from Alderaan,^[1] a very old, pristine planet covered with green plains,^[2]" The context for Alderaan seems a bit weird. I think its location in the galaxy would be more appropriate than a description of its terrain.
  • Changed. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:40, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
• We don't really use page numbers in the Sources section; this includes the CSWE. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:02, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 21:40, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:48, September 8, 2013 (UTC)