- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Agarees Shipyard Township
- Nominated by: --Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 01:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Another one just barely over the limit for WP:VG.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Currently sitting at 260 words by my count. Master Jonathan — Jedi Council Chambers Wednesday, October 12, 2011, 15:52 UTC
- Review done via IRC. MasterFred
(Whatever) 22:23, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
—Tommy 9281 Wednesday, October 19, 2011, 01:31 UTC
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:08, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
- Although I still think that adding empty infoboxes is completely pointless. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 11:09, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:27, October 23, 2011 (UTC)
Object
From the Council Chambers:
"a township, a group of individuals,": Unnecessary fluff. Please remove."a township, a place containing a group of individuals,": Ditto.- Removed for both.
"Antilles, a canonically popular name,": This needs to be sourced.- Done.
Resolving the first two objections will drop the article below 250 words. If you cannot get back above 250 without fluff, this will need to go to CAN.Master Jonathan — Jedi Council Chambers Wednesday, October 12, 2011, 01:46 UTC- Still at 250. I just added some context to mynock, which I was seriously debating about doing before the nom anyway. Thanks for the review!--Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 12:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Still at 250. I just added some context to mynock, which I was seriously debating about doing before the nom anyway. Thanks for the review!--Cal Jedi
Cav
infested with mynocks, flying creatures that fed on power cabling - do they eat the cabling, or the energy contained within the cabling? My understanding was it was the latter.- You're right. Fixed.
No article for this "Antilles"? They are a named individual character.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 13:21, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
- I thought about that while working on the article, but thought that I better not. There is a whole long list of Antilles, and it could be one of them. Since the databank just mentions an Antilles, I figured it would be assuming too much to say that it wasn't one of the ones already written about.--Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 19:22, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
I agree with Cav. You can call him "Unidentified Antilles (Agarees Shipyard Township)" or somesuch. If we were to find out who he was later, the appropriate actions would be taken. This is the only thing holding up my tentative support.—Tommy 9281 Monday, October 17, 2011, 21:47 UTC- Indeed. It's more of an assumption to assume that this Antilles is one of the ones mentioned on the list. As Tommy suggests, something like "Unidentified Antilles (Agarees Shipyard Township)" should be created and linked to. - Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 11:23, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
- But don't use "Unidentified," since he is identified. Antilles is his name. Menkooroo 12:00, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
- New article added. Thanks for the review.--Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 01:34, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
- New article added. Thanks for the review.--Cal Jedi
- But don't use "Unidentified," since he is identified. Antilles is his name. Menkooroo 12:00, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Indeed. It's more of an assumption to assume that this Antilles is one of the ones mentioned on the list. As Tommy suggests, something like "Unidentified Antilles (Agarees Shipyard Township)" should be created and linked to. - Cavalier One
- I thought about that while working on the article, but thought that I better not. There is a whole long list of Antilles, and it could be one of them. Since the databank just mentions an Antilles, I figured it would be assuming too much to say that it wasn't one of the ones already written about.--Cal Jedi
Moffship
Preliminary objection: Why is there an infobox if none of the fields can be filled?Grand Moff Tranner(Comlink) 14:49, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:27, October 23, 2011 (UTC)