- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Agamar slider
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:04, May 1, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- 501st dogma(talk) 13:10, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 18:43, May 31, 2015 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:22, July 23, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:04, July 24, 2015 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:08, July 25, 2015 (UTC)
Object
501st
You should be consistent in how you refer to the special sauce/garnish. The infobox has it as one, and the body has it as another.501st dogma(talk) 17:04, May 8, 2015 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:12, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
Initial objection: Please expand the introduction.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:46, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
- Expanded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:29, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
Where does the source say that it was inspired by his travels to Agamar? There is a general part mentioning his travels in the sliders section and the fact that the menu included his favorite foods that he had encountered over the years, but I can't find anything more specific than that. Unless it states otherwise, he could have easily came across the food somewhere else in his travels. It should still be mentioned that the slider was inspired by his travels, just don't state anything the article does not state.- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:32, May 22, 2015 (UTC)
The history section should mention that the Sernpidalian mayo-ketchup and Bimm mustard could be added if requested since this is specifically about Dex's Diner. In the description section, the special garnish, Sernpidalian mayo-ketchup, and Bimm mustard should be mentioned separately since these are Dex's menu options.- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:32, May 22, 2015 (UTC)
Why are you referring to the special garnish as special sauce?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:00, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:32, May 22, 2015 (UTC)
"Agamar sliders were a specialty vegetarian slider—a type of sandwich—consisting of an Agamarian soybean patty, in place of the standard Mongo Beefhead patty, topped with a slice of binka fruit and mugruebe spit-sauce all on a trans-shipped medium-density foodboard." Some of the information in this sentence really only applies to Dex's Diner: the part about it being specialty and the part about the standard patty should be moved to a separate sentence and connected to Dex's Diner as the menu is noting the difference between this sandwich and the others on the menu. Unless the source states that it is describing the standard slider everywhere, you need to state that this applies to Dex's Diner.- Reworded it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:59, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
"Acid-beet salad was first mentioned..." Seriously?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:19, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
- Wow. I can't believe this got through me checking, a CA nomination, a CA review, and several supporters on a GA nomination. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:59, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:08, July 25, 2015 (UTC)