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Adras

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 20:40, November 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Didn't think this would reach GA length. Makes me think our Legends coverage is woefully incomplete.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:28, November 4, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:19, November 15, 2018 (UTC)
  3. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 20:31, November 27, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:59, December 6, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 12:56, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • I think it's worth linking that the Battle of Endor mentioned at the start of the bio is the attack on the Death Star II mentioned at the end of the bio maybe by saying something like "above the moon of Endor" or something. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:15, November 15, 2018 (UTC)
QGJ
  • The "immigrated species" field of the infobox implies that the Sullustans were residing on Adras to begin this. The article itself does not make this evident. As I was reading it, I originally thought that the Sullustans merely went to Adras with an assignment, and were followed there by another Rebel group.
    • Well, that's exactly what should have been extrapolated from the source. Wouldn't you say that's enough to say they "immigrated" on Adras? Imperators II(Talk) 21:13, November 17, 2018 (UTC)
      • By traditional defintion, "immigration" means moving to another place with the intention to permanently reside there. This was obviously not the case here. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 20:39, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
        • I've gone ahead and removed the infobox item. Imperators II(Talk) 12:42, November 27, 2018 (UTC)
  • Is the "decrypter" the same thing as decrypt unit? If so, please link it. Also, I would like some context on this decrypter and how it is relevant to the story. Right now, I don't see much point in mentioning it. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 12:32, November 17, 2018 (UTC)
    • The Sullustans were a part of the mission at all because they had the thing. Imperators II(Talk) 21:13, November 17, 2018 (UTC)
      • And regarding the decrypt unit, I wondered about that, as well. In GG5, a "decrypter" is implied to be required for decrypting a "datadisk." In "Finder's Fee," the "decrypt unit" was thought by Thella to be required to decrypt a "data card" (referred to as "processor" by Loh'khar). So I guess you could say they're basically the same thing...? Anyway, linked. Imperators II(Talk) 16:43, November 20, 2018 (UTC)
        • I still think that it should be directly stated in the article that the Sullustans' decrypter was needed to access the datadisk of the other Rebel group. This connection can certainly be extrapolated from the article, but it needs to be established more firmly. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 20:39, November 22, 2018 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • The word "rendezvouz" is used like thirty-eleven times. Any chance of finding some synonyms?
  • The sole sentence in "Locations" just sounds awkward, particularly the second clause. See if you can reword it. 1358 (Talk) 20:44, December 5, 2018 (UTC)
    • Rearranged it. I'm OK with killing the section altogether if you like. Imperators II(Talk) 18:54, December 6, 2018 (UTC)
      • Looks fine now. 1358 (Talk) 19:59, December 6, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:56, December 7, 2018 (UTC)