Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Adar Tallon

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Adar Tallon

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:51, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 04:27, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 382 words (58 introduction, 216 body, 108 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 365 words (58 introduction, 212 body, 95 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional):

(4 ACs/0 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 06:42, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 15:21, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
3. Wok142 (talk) 20:23, 23 October 2024 (UTC)
4. Great work! Take note of when to use "that" and when to use "which." Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 03:48, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• The info about what he's wearing should be moved to an equipment section, and the info about his skin color etc should be moved to a personality and traits section Lewisr (talk) 20:55, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:30, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

spookly

• I think a smidge of context for what Star Wars: Armada is would be helpful (even if just a game).
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:34, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
• Do think it would be fair to include the main authors of Tatooine Manhunt, since it has only two if not including the individual who did one specific part, which Tallon doesn't seem to be in.—spookywilloww^talk 18:59, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:34, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:48, 26 October 2024 (UTC)