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Abrion Major
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IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:22, December 27, 2012 (UTC)- grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:09, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
- Winterz on a roll. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:37, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 22:21, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 17:45, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Floyd has one thing
Needs a Description section. First two sentences of History and the fact that they exported foodstuffs would probably be all that's in there, but still.IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 05:49, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
CC-8
There's a quote I used on Esu Rotsino's article that would be appropriate to use in this article.- I believe she's referring to the entire sector (The Abrion, as in The Abrion Sector).
- I still think its relevant, as she is the senator of Abrion Major and it would reflect the views of the people of both the planet and the sector. But hey, its your article. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 02:48, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Done.
- I still think its relevant, as she is the senator of Abrion Major and it would reflect the views of the people of both the planet and the sector. But hey, its your article. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 02:48, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- I believe she's referring to the entire sector (The Abrion, as in The Abrion Sector).
Foodstuffs should be linked in the infobox- Done.
Could Darth Krayt's Empire and the New Sith Empire be mentioned in the intro and infobox?Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 23:26, January 1, 2013 (UTC)- That's irrelevant info, CC, just some unofficial affilitations from the Atlas maps, nothing else. I'll have to bypass this objection ;) Winterz (talk) 23:37, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
- What do you mean by unofficial? What would make it unofficial. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42
- By unofficial I didn't mean "Non-canon". I meant that it is just an irrelevant fact which we can hardly assume... "Fell within the territory of X faction" because we read it in the maps. It's acceptable info but it's far from being significant enough to go to the intro. Winterz (talk) 02:55, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Okay then. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 22:21, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- By unofficial I didn't mean "Non-canon". I meant that it is just an irrelevant fact which we can hardly assume... "Fell within the territory of X faction" because we read it in the maps. It's acceptable info but it's far from being significant enough to go to the intro. Winterz (talk) 02:55, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- What do you mean by unofficial? What would make it unofficial. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42
- That's irrelevant info, CC, just some unofficial affilitations from the Atlas maps, nothing else. I'll have to bypass this objection ;) Winterz (talk) 23:37, January 1, 2013 (UTC)
Moffship
One minor objection: The current wording of the last sentence of the History section implies that the Clone Wars ended shortly before the rise of Krayt's Empire in 137 ABY. Please rephrase.- Good work. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 17:35, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:20, January 3, 2013 (UTC)