- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
84-U hunting rifle
- Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 12:10, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I decided we needed a weapon that started with a number. Also, not enough info for a Description section, so all relevant info went into the History section.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- A very nice article.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 19:25, August 15, 2011 (UTC) - Talrrivanian
(Headquarters) 07:25, August 20, 2011 (UTC) 
There was nothing in Al Capone's vault, but it wasn't Geraldo's fault! Menkooroo 00:24, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 17:58, September 1, 2011 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 07:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Ecks Dee
The intro seems somewhat disproportionate and could in my opinion be shortened just a lil' bit. Opinions?- Cut down a bit.
There's something wrong with your categories; please fix. ;)1358 (Talk) 22:49, August 26, 2011 (UTC)- Haha, fixed. Thanks for the review Xd. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:59, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
Baby on board, something something, Burt Ward
Super minor, but the sentence beginning with "At the same moment" has a lot of commas and kinda drags.Menkooroo 05:11, August 28, 2011 (UTC)- Cut into two sentences. Thanks for the review Menk. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:59, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
Some context needed on Snitkin in the intro.- Added
The phrase "[he] would rarely be seen without the weapon" seems a bit unencyclopedic, imo. I think this should be removed, as the previous clause already establishes that Lufba continued to possess it.- Deleted
- That's all for now. Good job. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 12:54, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for another review Tranner. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 14:38, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)