Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/41st Scout Battalion

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41st Scout Battalion

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:08, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  2. TK-462 (talk) 01:09, April 22, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Ben
Zed
  • While there is no set layout of organization articles in the LG, recent canon status articles such as Krypder Riders or Task Force 231 include a Description section before the History. I think the Characteristics section here should be moved and renamed as per this precedent.
  • The reference note for the Battlefront forum should be formatted to follow the format per this change. Zed42 (talk) 22:27, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • The information in the "Military unit type" infobox field appears to be exclusive to the infobox.
  • In the Description, can the entire first paragraph be referenced to the Collapse of the Republic reference? From the manual reference note, it doesn't seem like it can.
  • The first sentence of the History is unnecessary as it just repeats information previously established.
  • Since the Appearances section lists Battlefront II as identifying the unit, I think that should be mentioned in the BTS. The forum post can still be mentioned as providing the name prior to the game itself. Zed42 (talk) 00:22, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Could you provide a date in the BTS for when the game provided the unit's name? Zed42 (talk) 03:53, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
Fan
  • From the into: "Following the Battle of Coruscant at the twilight of the war in 19 BBY, a Jedi High Council meeting led Jedi General Mace Windu to reach the conclusion that Jedi General Yoda would lead a battalion to support the Wookiees on Kashyyyk." This sentence does not once mention the article subject, and contains way too much extra context for an article introduction. Please condense it and combine with the next sentence. Fan26 (Talk) 22:54, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • It would be good to check the major reference books (i.e. Ultimate Star Wars) for appearances or indirect mentions. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:19, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Well, now you have to do it because I found this in Galactic Atlas. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk)
      • I'll check, thanks!--Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:17, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
        • Added.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:34, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
          • I would recommend going through these sources to find every possible mention of the unit. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 04:52, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
            • Make sure to check film adaptations as well. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 04:59, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
              • Okay, I'll let you know when this is done--Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:34, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
                • Haven't found anything besides what's already been listed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:24, April 23, 2020 (UTC)
                  • As a note, I would suggest checking Helmet Collection or any De Agostini magazines for appearances or mentions. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:28, April 23, 2020 (UTC)
                    • Yeah, just found that it's on issue 60. Going to have to figure out how to get my hands on it or see if anyone has it. So far no luck but I'll let you know.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:03, April 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Ref 3 and 4 can be combined into a single reference.
  • The info about Kachirho ("major city") cannot be sourced to the film.
  • I don't believe the film refers to Kashyyyk as a "planet," so that will need a separate reference. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 05:18, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Helmet Collection magazines will need to incorporate {{HelmetCollectionCite}}. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 05:12, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
    • I don't know which sections of the magazines feature the unit, which is why I wrote it like that for now. It may be awhile before I'm able to get access to the necessary magazines. There may be as many as three magazines that feature it.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 03:32, April 26, 2020 (UTC)
      • Then you may need to pause the nomination until you are able to gather the sources. The article is already tagged with an Update template. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 04:39, April 26, 2020 (UTC)
        • Yeah I added the template. I've also been thinking of pausing the nomination.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 04:54, April 26, 2020 (UTC)

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