Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/332nd Company

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332nd Company

  • Nominated by: ComicalNinja [Talk] 21:24, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first GA. I've been working on it a lot recently.

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(Votes required: 3 AC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 AC votes required to pass.)

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Object

Ecks
  • Missing permanent archival links from one or more citation templates.
  • Check your image caption punctuation.
  • No suitable quote for the Description section?
  • Just at a cursory glance, there are significant issues with underlinking throughout the article. Please go through the entire article and add links as applicable.
  • You need to establish a timeline for the History (i.e. 19 BBY) and source it properly. 1358 (Talk) 17:25, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • You need to add the rest of the Siege of Mandalore episodes to Appearances.
    • I will, but this has been disputed. Vitus Infinitus did a headcount, though, and he says that all troopers with orange markings are 332nd Company. So, I'll add the episodes into Appearances. ComicalNinja [Talk] 01:32, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • That was only before Vitus etc seemingly changed their views, if they feel it should be added then fine by me --Lewisr (talk) 01:35, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • The intro can definitely be expanded to include information on the siege and what happened afterwards.
  • Info on siege in the History can be expanded, you've currently glossed over a lot of details. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:06, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • Expanded with more information. ComicalNinja [Talk] 18:49, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
      • The article now exceeds 1000 words (the GAN word limit) after the expansion. Since there is more work to be done, I would suggest asking an AC to take the nomination down. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:54, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • BTS is missing info on the source of the company's name. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:06, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
Vitus
  • In the Order 66 section you include the 332nd Company as part of the force that participated in the attempted execution of Ahsoka Tano but this is never confirmed. The 332nd Company contains 144 troopers are noted in the article, but we see at least several hundred throughout the four episodes. The only appearance we can confirm is in Old Friends Not Forgotten when Rex speaks and directly calls out the company in the hangar before the Siege of Mandalore. The article should be changed to better reflect that.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:07, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • I did a headcount and the numbers reflect that all observable troopers with the Orange Ahsoka markings are near 144 troopers, so I'm removing this objection.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:30, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • You will have to add the details of the episodes where they are depicted and similar information. This includes adding details about CT-0292, Ridge, Sterling, the Siege of Mandalore, and the Skirmish aboard Ahsoka Tano's Star Destroyer. The information is severely lacking in that regard.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 18:30, May 13, 2020 (UTC)
Tommy
  • Duplicate links.
    • Fixed. ComicalNinja [Talk] 14:34, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • No you haven't, 6 remain. If you go to preferences; gadgets, you can enable a tool that will highlight duplicate links when enabled from the bottom menu.
  • Unsourced information.
  • For an article of this size, the intro needs to be expanded.
  • The article is currently at 924 words by my count. Coupled with my third objection, as well as Vitus and Shay's requests for more detail, I think it is likely this article will run over the GAN's 1000-word limit. Tommy-Macaroni 12:26, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • I think this article also needs a "Commands and crew" or "Members" section, or something similarly titled, to discuss Ahsoka, Rex, Vaughn and any other members. Precedent for this exists for fleet and other large military unit articles such as One Oh Third Task Force.
  • Redirect. Tommy-Macaroni 15:06, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • This article is now well over 1000 words, meaning it is ineligible for GA status. Tommy-Macaroni 18:56, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • The article no longer exceeds the limit. ComicalNinja [Talk] 20:12, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
      • You should never deliberately shorten an article so it does not cross over the word limit. The article is now severely lacking in detail. "A skirmish erupted on the ship,[2] and ultimately everyone on board except for Rex, Tano, and Maul were killed when the vessel crashed on a moon." Like, this needs to be several paragraphs long to detail all of this. Trust me, for this article to be of sufficient detail, it will be over 1000 words. Tommy-Macaroni 20:23, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
        • Well, then, I suppose I'll carry it over to an FA nomination. ComicalNinja [Talk] 21:11, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
          • Okay. Can you give me permission to close this nom then please. Tommy-Macaroni 21:14, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

  • Archiving per nominator request. Tommy-Macaroni 21:46, May 18, 2020 (UTC)