- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
3946 BBY
- Nominated by: — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 13:14, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Continuation of FiolliProject: Time Travel, Phase 4
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 13:43, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
- MauserComlink 02:09, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:45, 12 August 2009 (UTC)- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 02:24, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
Keep up the great work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 19:35, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
Object
- One thing:
The first sentence of the intro has too many "durings." Other than that, fabulous work.Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:53, 9 August 2009 (UTC)- Whoops. :) Fixed. Thanks, Chack. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 18:24, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
In the intro, you make it sound as if the Gordian Reach is a star system, whereas I believe it is a Sector. (Once again, please correct me if I'm wrong) :PJonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 01:39, 13 August 2009 (UTC)- Clarified. Thanks — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 15:01, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:57, 16 August 2009 (UTC)