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14th Sector Fleet
- Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 19:17, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 358 words (95 introduction, 212 body, 51 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 291 words (26 introduction, 214 body, 51 behind the scenes)
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Support
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:55, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 05:17, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 01:16, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Wok142 (talk) 20:25, 23 October 2024 (UTC)- Booply (talk) 19:13, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
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Braha
Carida requires context.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:01, 20 September 2024 (UTC)- Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:31, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Thrawn
Could you expand the intro a with a little bit more detail about the fleets history? ThrawnChiss7Assembly Cupola 18:16, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- Expanded --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Lew
I assume there's a quote from Rise and Fall which can be added?Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)- Added two --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
There's enough room in the history for an imageLewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)- Added --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Is the info about Levinous entirely relevant to be noted here?Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)- I think so, it gives further context and the quotes don't really work without Levinous being mentioned. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- I think at least Levinous should be taken out of the intro unless you can reword it to read a bit smoother Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Removed! --Vitus InfinitusTalk 00:26, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
- I think at least Levinous should be taken out of the intro unless you can reword it to read a bit smoother Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- I think so, it gives further context and the quotes don't really work without Levinous being mentioned. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
I think it would be better to change the last sentence of the history to just indicate the book was in 35 ABY and drop mention of the battle, currently the way it's phrased could mean it was at any point after the Battle of ExegolLewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)- Reworded --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
The GCW is only mentioned in the introLewisr (talk) 23:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)- Added in body --Vitus InfinitusTalk 00:26, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:16, 24 October 2024 (UTC)