Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/108th

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108th

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:04, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CA nom that got a little past the word limit.

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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 14:52, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:25, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
3. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:00, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 13:08, June 23, 2020 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:57, June 27, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• Context for the Unyielding.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:43, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
• In the History section, I think you should specify who it was that attacked the Hellion Dare. Fan26 (Talk) 17:36, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:43, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Description section required per precedent. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:48, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:51, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

ComicalNinja

• The first sentence of the introduction is too similar to the first sentence of the History section.
  • Reworded--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:51, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
• There are better ways to say "The Galactic Empire's military."
  • This was carried from the previous nomination. I changed it to armed forces, I'm not sure how else to word it--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:51, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Sorry to confuse you, I meant something like "The Imperial Military of the Galactic Empire." It's a rather minor thing, though, so I'll do it myself in a copy-edit. ComicalNinja ^[Talk] 18:58, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
      • I originally had it as that but a previous objection from the previous nomination led by to rewrite it, so it's best to have it as it was before.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:14, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Duplicate links. ComicalNinja ^[Talk] 20:26, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Apparently the introduction of an article doesn't count for duplicate links, so I'm withdrawing this objection. ComicalNinja ^[Talk] 20:39, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• I think you could add Nuress's response as a quote to the History section. Zed42 (talk) 20:47, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:51, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Ben

• A lot of the second paragraph delves more into the conversation between Nuress and Madrighast than with the 108th itself. Considering that that paragraph was only meant to be able a proposal involving the unit that got rejected, I think it would be good to simplify the paragraph and trim any parts that don't correlate to the 108th, unless you don't think this is necessary? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 18:51, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Okay, shortened--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:24, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Similar to my objection above, the quote has little to do with the 108th. You could clarify in the attributions how this ties in with the subject of the article. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 09:07, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • The history quote that is. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 09:08, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
    • How's that?--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:31, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
      • She says "Instead of leaving for the Gordian Reach", you've said "before leaving for the Gordian Reach." I'd recommend changing that accordingly. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 14:41, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
        • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:43, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Anil

• Could you please briefly mention that Madrighast's intention to make the 204th join the 108th failed in the intro? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:19, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:02, June 15, 2020 (UTC)

Toprawa

• Does Alphabet Squadron actually say "supposed" death of Palpatine at Endor? Or are you arranging this wording based on Episode 9? "...the supposed death of Emperor Palpatine..." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:49, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • Ah, it's because of Ep IX. Fixed and reworded to better reflect the source.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:53, June 22, 2020 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Does Shadow Fall mention if Madrigast made it to the Gordian Reach or anything else potentially relevant? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:10, June 26, 2020 (UTC)
  • It basically only mentions a hologram of Madrighast saying that he's inviting any survivors from the 204th after Pandem Nai to join him and Admiral Sloane's fleet--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 05:17, June 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • Having finally reached the bit of the book mentioning him, I think you could just add a short sentence saying something like "A few weeks later, Madrighast sent a message to the 204th again, inviting them to join him in rendezvousing with the forces of Admiral Rae Sloane." Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:07, June 27, 2020 (UTC)
      • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:18, June 27, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Just a question, not an objection, but why is there a ref after the word "the" in "maintaintained forces in the Outer Rim's Gordian Reach"? (In the description section) ComicalNinja ^[Talk] 19:05, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Everything prior can be cited to Alphabet Squadron but the Outer Rim needs to be cited to a different source.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:23, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:58, June 27, 2020 (UTC)