Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Zafiel Snopps

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 00:39, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 07:05, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Zafiel Snopps

Needs a pronouns/gender update, and family fields to be filled in/cleared out.
Family fields to be cleared up.
The body and BTS would probably benefit from some relevant images being added.
Raithal could use context.
Biography could use sectioning.
Some of the information in the personality/traits section would be better split off into equipment and skills/abilities section.
Full release dates for The Best of the Star Wars Adventure Journal, Issues 1-4 and Shadows of the Empire Sourcebook should be provided since both released in the same year.
Regarding the BTS, if there's no way to maybe try condense the section to 3 paragraphs by way of any cuttings, then it should be sectioned. Lewisr (talk) 00:39, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:23, 7 August 2024 (UTC)