Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Ulabore

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Ulabore

• Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
• Date Requested: 00:37, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 18:10, 12 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

• The BBY dates needs to be cited to a source. The one in the infobox should be included in a note if not directly citable to another source.
• Needs a pronouns/gender update, and family fields to be cleared.
• I think the intro could be split into 2 paragraphs.
• The biography needs to be sectioned, will have room for more images and quotes.
• Is 'Dessel eventually became Darth Bane, one of the most important and influential Dark Lords of the Sith in galactic history' really citable to Path of Destruction?
• Alaris Prime needs context.
• Missing a skills/abilities section and an equipment section.
• BTS needs to cut the second sentence as it's redundant. Lewisr (talk) 00:37, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:02, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

1. Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:03, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 00:17, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:07, 12 September 2024 (UTC)