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Taryn Clancy
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 02:28, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 08:21, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Object
- Would like it to be confirmed all the BBY/ABY years can be dated directly to the journal, or if they need notes.
- Birth year infobox exclusive.
- Equipment?
- Seems like some of the P+T can also be sectioned off into a skills and abilities section.
- Pronoun/gender update and clearing family parameters.
- Coruscant and Coriallis context.
- "The flight from Coruscant" seems like it can be subsectioned into two sections of two, more in line with what we do nowadays (with an additional quote/image popped in if can be).
- BtS to be properly sourced with some OOU dating for the journal release.
- Probably needs a decent copy-edit all the way through for general style, seeing some stuff like "16" instead of "sixteen" in article body, which isn't optimal.—spookywillowwtalk 02:28, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:53, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
Vote to retain Featured status
Vote to strip Featured status
Two months unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 03:08, 18 December 2023 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 03:09, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 08:21, 18 December 2023 (UTC)