Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Spilferithimus-narlamos

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Spilferithimus-narlamos

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:31, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 07:28, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update.
  • The referencing needs to be updated to reflect the sourcing policy regarding citing by page numbers.
  • The intro could use restructuring to maybe 3 similar sized paragraphs?
  • The biography needs more sectioning, and will have room for some more images.
  • There's a few dup links to be removed.
  • Some information from the personality/traits section would be better placed in a skills/abilities and an equipment section.
  • The BTS should be looked at to see if there's anything trimmable, and if not then could use maybe splitting into 3 paras, I think an image (of one of the creators involved or an image of the source materials cover) should be added also. Lewisr (talk) 00:31, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:10, 3 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Two months unadressed Lewisr (talk) 00:02, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:04, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:27, 4 September 2024 (UTC)