Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Shannon Voorson

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  • 1 Shannon Voorson
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Featured status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Featured status

Shannon Voorson

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 19:45, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 07:30, 7 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Is that birth year directly citable to the Adventure Journal or does it need an explanatory note saying it's X number of years prior to it etc.? Same thing with the main year presented; to be verified if its in the text itself.
  • Pronouns/gender update.
  • I see a redlink.
  • More sectioning needed (and then quotes/images to thus populate) to modern standard of 2-3 paragraphs per section. Images to be placed below quotes.
  • Equipment (including clothing) to be sectioned out, as well as skills in its own section.
  • Unsourced BtS which also needs release year and month. Also needs illustrator info.

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 02:47, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:37, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:38, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:30, 7 August 2024 (UTC)