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Shannon Voorson
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 19:45, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 07:30, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Is that birth year directly citable to the Adventure Journal or does it need an explanatory note saying it's X number of years prior to it etc.? Same thing with the main year presented; to be verified if its in the text itself.
- Pronouns/gender update.
- I see a redlink.
- More sectioning needed (and then quotes/images to thus populate) to modern standard of 2-3 paragraphs per section. Images to be placed below quotes.
- Equipment (including clothing) to be sectioned out, as well as skills in its own section.
- Unsourced BtS which also needs release year and month. Also needs illustrator info.
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 02:47, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
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Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:37, 7 August 2024 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 00:38, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 07:30, 7 August 2024 (UTC)