Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Samoc Farr/Legends

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Samoc Farr/Legends

• Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
• Date Requested: 01:57, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 04:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Object

• The Human note is rather speculative and should be removed, instead perhaps noting that Toryn is a Human.
• Similarly the light skin note is speculative and should be removed.
  • Those have been addressed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:17, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
    • I do think that Toryn is a human would be worth noting, especially upon checking that it is citable to the short story Lewisr (talk) 18:31, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Added.
• The biography would benefit from being subsectioned.
• The above will allow for more quotes and images to be added if there are any.
  • Subsectioned, and all other quotes are during the Battle of Hoth, so no quote for the subsection before Hoth.
    • Thanks for doing, think there's definitely room for more images though, especially if the current are moved around a bit Lewisr (talk) 18:23, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Rearranged a couple images and added a couple.
• Is there no quote that can be added to the P/T section?
  • Added.
• 'Farr had always been regarded as the most beautiful' is there any indication of who regarded Samoc this way?
  • Unclear if that's Toryn or their mother. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
• Some of the P/T would be best served being placed in a skills/abilities section, along with anything else of note.
• Missing an equipment section.
  • For the first, added. For the second, I couldn't find anything about uniforms, weapons, etc. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:00, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
    • The snowspeeder could be included in equipment Lewisr (talk) 18:32, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:03, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
• The latter half of the BTS doesn't really seem citable to the story itself, so that needs to be sourced correctly if there is a source. If the mention of it stays, then ESB requires a release year. Lewisr (talk) 01:57, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Not quite seeing why that text is even necessary for Samoc's entry, so removed it. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:35, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to retain Featured status

1. —spookywilloww^talk 18:09, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
3. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:31, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Vote to strip Featured status