Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Ravilan Wroth

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Ravilan Wroth

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:17, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 06:34, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update, and family fields to be cleared out.
  • The biography in terms of structure is a bit all over the place. I think it needs serious work in being restructured and sectioned.
  • More images that are subject relevant can be added.
  • Is there a way to make the personality/traits section into 3 paragraphs or should it be sectioned?
  • Missing an equipment section.
  • BTS needs to be cleaned up to remove redundant mentions of later appearances/mentions. But the Pantheon book does need to be mentioned to note the name identification and given a release year. Lewisr (talk) 00:17, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:01, 23 August 2024 (UTC)

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  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:05, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:22, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:34, 23 September 2024 (UTC)