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R3-S6/Legends
- Requested By: Master Fredcerique
(talk) (he/him) - Date Requested: 17:52, 18 August 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 08:04, 21 December 2023 (UTC)
Object
- Needs subsectioning.
- Unsourced first paragraph in Bts.
- Multiple duplicate links. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 17:52, 18 August 2023 (UTC)
- All done. —Tomotron
Sith Council 05:15, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- All done. —Tomotron
- Pronouns update should be completed, along with verification on whether the droid is masculine-programmed under the current rules.
- I think further subsectioning of the biography would be optimal, but specifically to have it so that 2-3 (and only very occasionally 4) paragraphs are used per section. But, in this as well—this article's existing paragraphs are quite large and chunky, and can be split in two in some instances. I'm also unsure a single-paragraph subsection for origins necessary, especially given there's not a quote for it. Essentially, the two original sections—"Separatist spy" and "Allegiance revealed"—can somewhat be broken up so that each of those individual sections becomes split in half, making for 4 total subsections all of a decent 2-3 paragraph length. This article is also quite light on images, which can be added alongside quotes when this is done.
- BtS needs some work. Namely, full episode release date for "Downfall of a Droid." Since the visual guide being discussed is from the same year, that too needs its full release date, not just the month.
- Second BtS paragraph can have a decent amount trimmed for it under modern precedent of being irrelevant (everything except for the DS version alternate story seems unnecessary), given that they're all not the 1stm/1st or anything.
- Some BtS images can be added of the various books/games and such mentioned.
- Current precedent also usually has full release dates for magazines.
- Unsure if the full release date for LEGO Star Wars III: The Clone Wars is sourcable to only the game itself, but may not be necessary, year only could suffice.—spookywillowwtalk 19:33, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 01:38, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
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Objections 1 month unaddressed while under probation.—spookywillowwtalk 00:40, 21 December 2023 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 00:45, 21 December 2023 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 08:04, 21 December 2023 (UTC)
