Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Octa Ramis

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Octa Ramis

• Requested By: ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola}
• Date Requested: 00:45, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 18:02, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

• Ref 2 needs to be cleaned up
• Behind the scenes needs to be fully cited
• I don't think we do "Indirect appearances anymore"
• Article body needs to make mention of the fact she was mentioned in Jedi vs. Sith: The Essential Guide to the Force. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 00:45, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Done, along with many, many other things to clean up the article. Will continue working on it. OOM 224 (he/him) 11:01, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
• Check abridged audiobooks
• Investigate possibly irrelevant information and cut down on unnecessary context throughout the body
  • Done for the Yuuzhan Vong War, the Swarm War, and events in Apocalypse OOM 224 (he/him) 09:55, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
• Expand on her relationships with other Jedi in P&T
• Equipment section? OOM 224 (he/him) 15:46, 14 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Sent to probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 05:06, 1 May 2023 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

1. Month on probation; unaddressed objections.—spookywilloww^talk 17:18, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:16, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
3. Hate to see it. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 18:00, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:02, 14 June 2023 (UTC)