Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Ngaaluh

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Ngaaluh

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 01:17, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 08:41, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a gender/pronouns update.
  • Hair color is infobox exclusive.
  • Per the layout guide 'The "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one.'
  • Contexts missing for various locations throughout the body and intro.
  • The biography and personality/traits section could use more images.
  • A number of the paragraphs in the biography could use splitting into smaller ones.
  • Anything that can be included in skills/abilities and an equipment section?
  • BTS needs to be cleaned up and removal of redundant information about later sources and about the character's arc. What remains needs to be sourced. Lewisr (talk) 01:17, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:14, 13 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:01, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:03, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:40, 13 September 2024 (UTC)