Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Nera Dantels

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 01:24, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 17:16, 15 September 2024 (UTC)

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Nera Dantels

Needs a pronouns/gender update, as well as the family fields clearing out.
Hair and eye color are infobox exclusive.
I'm going to enquire about the top quote and ask if there's another one that isn't really centered on how Nera looks that could be put there instead.
Various locations throughout the intro and body are missing contexts.
A couple of the sections in the biography would benefit from being subsectioned.
Some of the body images could be increased in size.
The caption for several of the images in the body could use some minor expansion to give some more relevance for inclusion.
Redirect to be fixed.
Some of the personality/traits section would be better served in a skills/abilities (as well as including anything else of note).
Missing an equipment section.
The BTS needs to be cleaned up to remove redundant mentions of later sources/appearances Nera was in. from what I see the only ones that need to be mentioned are the first appearance and the issue that identified Nera's first name. Lewisr (talk) 01:24, 15 July 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:01, 15 August 2024 (UTC)