Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Nax Cirvan

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Nax Cirvan

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:20, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 06:48, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update and fily fields cleared out.
  • Could the introduction be split?
  • Rullag needs context.
  • The "Service to the Empire" section should be sectioned, and there's enough room for another image.
  • Missing an equipment section.
  • BTS needs to be brought to modern standards, just mentioning his first appearance in the 4th issue, with a full release date.
  • I think the part about Cirvan's species depiction mentioned in the BTS might be better suited including in the PT section. Lewisr (talk) 00:20, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:03, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

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Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:01, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 03:20, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:48, 29 August 2024 (UTC)