Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Mission to Vassek's third moon

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 03:28, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 08:22, 18 December 2023 (UTC)

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Mission to Vassek's third moon

Prev, conc, next fields to be either deemed relevant to article prose and added, or removed from infobox.
Context needed for Rodia, Coruscant, Bestine.
Multiple paragraphs in the prelude and mission sections have double references at the end of them. The sourcing needs to fully checked throughout the respective paragraphs instead of sticking both references at the end.
Images could be increased in size.
The appearances and behind the scenes sections need to note that the first appearance was actually in the reel for the "Rookies" episode, and that it later appeared in the "Lair of Grievous" episode.
The BTS needs to note the first indirect mention of the mission per the Insider 104 launchpad. Lewisr (talk) 03:28, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 00:54, 18 November 2023 (UTC)