Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Malinza Thanas

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 19:45, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
Date Archived: 08:21, 10 November 2025 (UTC)

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Malinza Thanas

Outstanding fact tags.
Those intro paragraphs look really chunky on modern Fandom skin; perhaps rearranging them into three would be better.
In the same vein, most of the Biography suffers from the same problem and would benefit from additional subsectioning, along with the additional space for quotes and images that brings.
The PT should be divided up appropriately to section off Skills and Equipment information, as well as a cursory source check for any information (like clothing) not often documented on older nominations like this.
The BTS looks like it has a lot of source regurgitation that would be removed under modern standard.
Instead of double-referencing the birth year, surely a manual ref note could be written out.
BTS has room for an image, perhaps a book cover or something.—spookywilloww^talk 19:45, 10 September 2025 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at one month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 00:04, 10 October 2025 (UTC)